From c9a36b989bfc02e64a1341da53db0aff9c9060ec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Allan=20Nordh=C3=B8y?= <epost@anotheragency.no>
Date: Sun, 10 Jan 2021 08:59:49 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Landing page language reworked

---
 input/index.html | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/input/index.html b/input/index.html
index e14ed2c..64d2c2b 100644
--- a/input/index.html
+++ b/input/index.html
@@ -3,21 +3,21 @@
         <div class="grid-x grid-padding-x">
             <div class="cell medium-6">
                 <h2 class="center text-center">Welcome to Cytopia</h2>
-                <p>This is <strong>Cytopia</strong>, a free, opensource Citybuilding game focussing on moddability and our community.</p>
-                <p>Cytopia is being actively developed, jump in and help us shape the game to be the city building simulation you have always wished for.</p>
+                <p>This is <strong>Cytopia</strong>, a gratis and copylefted libre software citybuilding game focusing on moddability and community.</p>
+                <p>Cytopia is actively developed. Jump in and help shape the game to be the city building simulation you always wished for.</p>
             </div>
             <div class="cell medium-6">
                 <div class="orbit" role="region" aria-label="Favorite Space Pictures" data-orbit>
                     <div class="orbit-wrapper">
                         <div class="orbit-controls">
-                            <button class="orbit-previous"><span class="show-for-sr">Previous Slide</span>&#9664;&#xFE0E;</button>
-                            <button class="orbit-next"><span class="show-for-sr">Next Slide</span>&#9654;&#xFE0E;</button>
+                            <button class="orbit-previous"><span class="show-for-sr">Previous slide</span>&#9664;&#xFE0E;</button>
+                            <button class="orbit-next"><span class="show-for-sr">Next slide</span>&#9654;&#xFE0E;</button>
                         </div>
                         <ul class="orbit-container">
                             <li class="is-active orbit-slide">
                                 <figure class="orbit-figure">
                                     <img class="orbit-image" src="images/jimmy1_2.jpg" alt="Image of some pixelated farmland">
-                                    <figcaption class="orbit-caption">Nice looking Farmland.</figcaption>
+                                    <figcaption class="orbit-caption">Nice looking farmland.</figcaption>
                                 </figure>
                             </li>
                             <li class="orbit-slide">
@@ -62,15 +62,15 @@ <h2 class="center text-center">Welcome to Cytopia</h2>
             <i class="fab fa-github"></i>
         </span>
         <h3>Open Source</h3>
-        <p>Our repository is hosted on github.<br> Take a look at what is going on.</p>
-        <a href="https://github.com/JimmySnails/Cytopia" class="button button-style1">Github Project</a>
+        <p>Help improve the source code on GitHub.</p>
+        <a href="https://github.com/JimmySnails/Cytopia" class="button button-style1">GitHub Project</a>
     </div>
     <div class="cell medium-3 small-centered">
         <span class="section-icon">
             <i class="fab fa-discord"></i>
         </span>
-        <h3>Join the discord server</h3>
-        <p>Join our discord server and participate in the development.</p>
+        <h3>Join the Discord server</h3>
+        <p>Join the Discord server and participate in the development.</p>
         <a href="https://discord.gg/qwa2H3G" class="button button-style1">Discord Server</a>
     </div>
     <div class="cell medium-3 small-centered">
@@ -78,8 +78,8 @@ <h3>Join the discord server</h3>
             <i class="fab fa-reddit"></i>
         </span>
         <h3>Reddit</h3>
-        <p>Join our reddit community.</p>
-        <a href="https://www.reddit.com/r/Cytopia/" class="button button-style1">Cytopia Subreddit</a>
+        <p>Join our Reddit community.</p>
+        <a href="https://www.reddit.com/r/Cytopia/" class="button button-style1">Cytopia subreddit</a>
     </div>
     <div class="cell medium-3 small-centered">
         <span class="section-icon">
@@ -89,4 +89,4 @@ <h3>Patreon</h3>
         <p>Help the project financially by becoming a Patreon today.</p>
         <a href="https://www.patreon.com/cytopia" class="button button-style1">Cytopia Patreon</a>
     </div>
-</div>
\ No newline at end of file
+</div>