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Author: ocaisa

isc25/EESSI/abstract.tex

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 What if you could avoid installing a broad range of scientific software from scratch on every
-supercomputer, cloud instance, or laptop you use or maintain, without compromising on performance?
+supercomputer, cloud instance, or laptop you use or maintain\ldots without compromising on performance?
 
 Installing scientific software is known to be a tedious and time-consuming task. The software stack
 continues to deepen as computational science expands rapidly, the diversity of system architectures
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 This tutorial aims to address these challenges by introducing (i) \emph{CernVM-FS},
 a distributed read-only filesystem designed to efficiently \emph{stream} software installations on-demand,
 and (ii) the \emph{European Environment for Scientific Software Installations (EESSI)},
-a shared repository of optimised scientific software installations (\emph{not} recipes) that can be used on a variety of
+a shared repository of optimised scientific software installations (\underline{not} recipes) that can be used on a variety of
 systems, regardless of which flavor/version of Linux distribution or processor architecture is used, or whether it's a full size HPC
 cluster, a cloud environment, or a personal workstation.
 

isc25/EESSI/description.tex

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 category.\footnote{\href{https://www.eessi.io/docs/blog/2024/11/18/hpcwire-readers-choice-awards-2024-for-eessi/}{https://www.eessi.io/docs/blog/2024/11/18/hpcwire-readers-choice-awards-2024-for-eessi/}}
 
 EESSI is an initiative built on the foundations of the EasyBuild community, which is used by well over 100 HPC sites worldwide
-(incl. JSC, CSCS, the Digital Research Alliance of Canada, LUMI, \ldots), and goes one step further by providing a
+(such as JSC, CSCS, the Digital Research Alliance of Canada, LUMI, \ldots). EESSI goes one step further than EasyBuild by providing a
 truly uniform software stack. It already has a wide spectrum of collaborators including SURF, BSC, Ghent University, etc.,
 despite being a relatively young project.