Rewrote sentence that seemed awkward

scottcpeterson · web-flow · commit 85840dbdf028 · 2019-05-31T16:00:32.000-07:00
This sentence seemed awkward, so I tried to rewite it to improve it.
diff --git a/episodes/01-introduction.md b/episodes/01-introduction.md
@@ -29,4 +29,4 @@ Third, each part of Library Carpentry may require you to install software or dow
 
 Fourth, we encourage you to finish up or repeat tasks after class time: if you run into any problem, please report them on the relevant Github issues page (see the bottom of each lesson page for a link).
 
-Most Library Carpentry lessons will require you to follow along whilst your instructor demonstrates a software tool or approach. Sometimes you will fall behind. If you do raise your red stick note and as a helper if we can slow the pace. Your issue may be specific to your computer. Computers are stupid, can frustrate, and as you all have different machines it can be tricky to resolve problems. Please be patient, particularly if your issue is local. Stepping outside and taking a gulp of fresh air always helps.
+Most Library Carpentry lessons will require you to follow along while your instructor demonstrates a software tool or approach. Sometimes you will fall behind. If you put your red sticky note up on your computer, this lets a helper know you need assistance. Your issue may be specific to your computer. Computers are stupid, can frustrate, and as you all have different machines it can be tricky to resolve problems. Please be patient, particularly if your issue is local. Stepping outside and taking a gulp of fresh air always helps.

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`30`	`30`	`Fourth, we encourage you to finish up or repeat tasks after class time: if you run into any problem, please report them on the relevant Github issues page (see the bottom of each lesson page for a link).`
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`32`		-Most Library Carpentry lessons will require you to follow along whilst your instructor demonstrates a software tool or approach. Sometimes you will fall behind. If you do raise your red stick note and as a helper if we can slow the pace. Your issue may be specific to your computer. Computers are stupid, can frustrate, and as you all have different machines it can be tricky to resolve problems. Please be patient, particularly if your issue is local. Stepping outside and taking a gulp of fresh air always helps.
	`32`	+Most Library Carpentry lessons will require you to follow along while your instructor demonstrates a software tool or approach. Sometimes you will fall behind. If you put your red sticky note up on your computer, this lets a helper know you need assistance. Your issue may be specific to your computer. Computers are stupid, can frustrate, and as you all have different machines it can be tricky to resolve problems. Please be patient, particularly if your issue is local. Stepping outside and taking a gulp of fresh air always helps.