Enhanced explanation on SBPA

Author: Antonio Maradiaga

exercises/09-rest-delivery-points/README.md

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 ![Final data flow](../../assets/diagrams/final-diagram.png)
 
-There are scenarios where the target system/application can't consume messages directly from an event broker but we still want these systems/applications to react to event as they are produced. Fortunately, some of these systems might expose APIs (REST endpoints) through which we can notify them of an event. For these cases, we can leverage REST Delivery Points to forward messages from a queue to that system. For example, the integration between SAP S/4HANA Cloud and SAP Build Process Automation goes through SAP Event Mesh. In SAP Event Mesh we end up configuring a [webhook subscription](https://help.sap.com/docs/event-mesh/event-mesh/manage-webhook-subscriptions) to [forward the events received and start a process](https://help.sap.com/docs/build-process-automation/sap-build-process-automation/create-event-triggers) in SAP Build Process Automation. 
+There are scenarios where the target system/application can't consume messages directly from an event broker but we still want these systems/applications to be part of our event-driven world and react to events as they are produced. Fortunately, some of these systems might expose APIs (REST endpoints) through which we can notify them of an event. For these cases, we can leverage REST Delivery Points to forward messages from a queue to that system. For example, the integration between SAP S/4HANA Cloud and SAP Build Process Automation goes through SAP Event Mesh. In SAP Event Mesh we end up configuring a [webhook subscription](https://help.sap.com/docs/event-mesh/event-mesh/manage-webhook-subscriptions) to [forward the events received and start a process](https://help.sap.com/docs/build-process-automation/sap-build-process-automation/create-event-triggers) in SAP Build Process Automation.
 
-If you remember the CodeJam's [integration scenario](../../../README.md#integration-scenario), we have an SAP S/4HANA Cloud System that generates events whenever a performer is added in the system (BusinessPartner) and we would like to trigger the "*Performer requirement checks*" process in SAP Build Process Automation. Although we will not be creating a process/interacting with SAP Build Process Automation in this CodeJam, it is important to understand the mechanism available to forward events to systems that expose REST endpoints. From now on, we will refer to these types of systems as **REST consumers**.
+If you remember the CodeJam's [integration scenario](../../../README.md#integration-scenario), we have an SAP S/4HANA Cloud System that generates events whenever a performer is added in the system (BusinessPartner) and we would like to trigger the "*Performer requirement checks*" process in SAP Build Process Automation. Although we will not be creating a process/interacting with SAP Build Process Automation in this CodeJam, it is important to understand the mechanism available to forward events to systems that expose REST endpoints. Therefore, we will forward messages from a queue to a REST consumer similar to how we would do it if we would like to forward the message to SAP Build Process Automation. From now on, we will refer to these types of systems as **REST consumers**.
 
 > If you are interested in exploring how you can configure the webhook subscription mentioned above in SAP Event Mesh, you can check out this [SAP Tech Bytes: Deliver events from SAP EventMesh to SAP Build Process Automation](https://community.sap.com/t5/technology-blogs-by-sap/sap-tech-bytes-deliver-events-from-sap-eventmesh-to-sap-build-process/ba-p/13574547).