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Co-authored-by: Penelope Yong <[email protected]>

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_quarto.yml

@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ website:
   page-footer:
     #background: "#073c44"
     left: |
-      Turing is created by <a href="http://mlg.eng.cam.ac.uk/hong/" target="_blank">Hong Ge</a>, and maintained by the <a href="https://github.com/TuringLang/Turing.jl/graphs/contributors" target="_blank">core team of volunteers</a>. <br>
+      Turing is created by <a href="http://mlg.eng.cam.ac.uk/hong/" target="_blank">Hong Ge</a>, and maintained by the <a href="/team" target="_blank">core team of developers</a>. <br>
       © 2024 under the terms of the <a href="https://github.com/TuringLang/Turing.jl/blob/master/LICENCE" target="_blank">MIT License</a>. 
 
   back-to-top-navigation: true

index.qmd

@@ -62,9 +62,9 @@ description: |
 <div class="d-flex flex-row flex-wrap panel-wrapper gap-4 section-end-space">
   <div class="panel">
     <div class="panel-title pb-1">
-      Intuitive
+      Expressive
     </div>
-    Turing models are easy to write and communicate — syntax is close to mathematical notations. 
+    Turing models are easy to write and communicate — their syntax closely resembles mathematical notation. 
   </div>
   <div class="panel">
     <div class="panel-title pb-1">
@@ -74,9 +74,9 @@ description: |
   </div>
   <div class="panel">
     <div class="panel-title pb-1">
-      Modular & composable
+      Composable
     </div>
-    Turing is modular, written entirely in Julia, and is interoperable with the powerful Julia ecosystem.
+    Turing is written entirely in Julia, and is interoperable with its powerful ecosystem.
   </div>
 </div>
 ```
@@ -98,7 +98,6 @@ description: |
     # Bernoulli distributions with success rate `p`
     y ~ filldist(Bernoulli(p), N)
 
-    return y
 end;
 ```
 </div>
@@ -146,23 +145,23 @@ end
       Ecosystem
     </div>
     <p class="quarto-grid-item">
-      Learn about all the packages that are part of The Turing Organization.
+      Learn about all the packages that are part of the TuringLang organization.
     </p>
   </a>
   <a class="pseudolisting" href="https://turinglang.org/docs/tutorials/docs-00-getting-started/">
     <div class="card-title h5">
       Documentation
     </div>
     <p class="quarto-grid-item">
-      Familiarize yourself with the Turing.jl API.
+      Familiarize yourself with the mechanics of Turing.jl.
     </p>
   </a>
   <a class="pseudolisting" href="https://turinglang.org/docs/tutorials/00-introduction/">
     <div class="card-title h5">
       Official tutorials
     </div>
     <p class="quarto-grid-item">
-      Learn to tackle specific problems with Turing.jl.
+      Learn to tackle specific modelling problems with Turing.jl.
     </p>
   </a>
 </div>
@@ -211,12 +210,12 @@ Placeholder text introducing the Bayesian Workflow diagram from the ACM special
   </ul>
 </div>
 <div class="flex-grow-1">
-  <h3>Inofficial tutorials</h3>
-  <p>Placeholder for intro text on list of inofficial tutorials</p>
+  <h3>Other resources</h3>
+  <p>This list contains a few other written resources for learning Turing. If you have written something and would like to share it with the community, please <a href="https://github.com/TuringLang/docs/issues/new">get in touch</a>!</p>
   <ul>
     <li><a href="https://github.com/StatisticalRethinkingJulia/SR2TuringPluto.jl">Statistical Rethinking</a>
-    <li><a href="storopoli.github.io/Turing-Workshop/">Jose Storopoli's Turing workshop</a>
-    <li><a href="https://storopoli.io/Bayesian-Julia/">Jose Storopoli's blog on Turing and Bayesian Statistics</a>
+    <li><a href="https://storopoli.github.io/Turing-Workshop/">Jose Storopoli's Turing workshop (outdated in parts)</a>
+    <li><a href="https://storopoli.github.io/Bayesian-Julia/">Jose Storopoli's blog on Turing and Bayesian Statistics</a>
     <li>Placeholder for more...
   </ul>
 </div>