Update rclone.md

Corrections for typos, grammar, style.

Some minor clarifications.

Author: ikirker

mkdocs-project-dir/docs/Walkthroughs/rclone.md

@@ -1,58 +1,57 @@
 # Rclone
 
- [Rclone](https://rclone.org/) is a command-line program to manage files on cloud storage. This is a walkthrough for 
+ [**Rclone**](https://rclone.org/) is a command-line program to manage files on cloud storage. This is a walkthrough for 
  configuring **Rclone** to be used with Microsoft OneDrive but it also can be used with several other cloud systems like 
  Dropbox, Google Drive, etc.
 
 We have installed 2 versions of rclone in our clusters. ```rclone/1.61.0``` was used as reference for this walkthrough 
-but the process is similar with other versions.
+but the process is similar with other versions. Generally, you should use the highest-numbered version.
 
 After loading the module with the command:
 
 ```
-module load rclone/1.61.0 , 
+module load rclone/1.61.0
 ```
 
-the next step is to configure **RClone**. As the cloud systems usually have quite complicated authentication methods,
+the next step is to configure **Rclone**. As the cloud systems usually have quite complicated authentication methods,
 these are kept in a config file. For example, the configuration file for **OneDrive** and **Dropbox** involve getting 
 a **token** from **Microsoft** and **Dropbox** respectively, to link your account in the cloud system with **Rclone**. 
 There are several ways to get this token and here is presented the easiest. If this method does not work for you, please 
-contact our support: [[email protected]]
+contact our support: [[email protected]](mailto:[email protected])
 
-The method that allows an automatic way to get and add the token to the configuration file requires to uses
-[X-Forwarding](https://www.rc.ucl.ac.uk/docs/Supplementary/X-Forwarding/ )
-in your ssh connection. This will allow to the cluster to push an interactive window to your local computer over a network. 
+The method that allows an automatic way to get and add the token to the configuration file requires using
+[X-Forwarding](../Supplementary/X-Forwarding.md)
+in your SSH connection. This will allow the cluster to push an interactive browser window to your local computer over a network. 
 In this window you will enter your credentials and connect to the account you want to link with **Rclone** (e.g. Microsoft
 One Drive or Dropbox). If you have activated MFA in your account, it will ask you for the respective code. Note that the 
 connection to internet could not the best and it might take a while to load the page.
 
 ### X-Forwarding in Linux
 
-If you are using linux, the X-Forwarding is very easy. Just add ```-X``` option to your ssh command like this: 
+If you are using Linux, the X-Forwarding is very easy. Just add `-X` option to your SSH command like this: 
 
 ```
 ssh -X [email protected]
 ```
 ### X-Forwarding in Mac
 
-If you are using Mac, there is an app called ***XQuartz** you must donwload first and then use the ```-Y``` option with the
-ssh command to allow X-forwarding. 
+If you are using Mac, there is an app called ***XQuartz** you must donwload first and then use the `-Y` option with the
+`ssh` command to allow X-forwarding. 
 
 ### X-Forwarding in Windows
 
-If you are using Windows, you need to install an ```X``` server separately. The use **Xming** with ***Putty** is suggested 
+If you are using Windows, you need to install an X server separately. The use of **Xming** with ***Putty** is suggested 
 to configure **Rclone**, although you can use your preferred method. You can download **Xming-fonts** free from 
 [here](https://sourceforge.net/projects/xming/files/). Once you download it and install it, you must open **Xming** in your
-computer before connecting to ssh. The application is always working on the background so you will see anything opening after
+computer before connecting to ssh. The application is always working on the background so you may not see anything opening after
 click on it.
 
-Then, to connect to ssh we suggest to use **Putty** unless you know how to allow the X-forwarding with another method. To
-configure **Putty** to use x-Forwarding, you must look at the left side panel and go to ```SSH``` category. Then select ```X11```
-and in there tick on ```Enable X11 forwarding``` (the box must be blue).  Then enter the details to connect to the cluster in
+Then, to connect via SSH we suggest using **Putty** unless you know how to allow X-forwarding with another method. To
+configure **Putty** to use X-Forwarding, you must look at the left side panel and go to ++SSH++ category. Then select ++X11++
+and ensure the checkbox for ++Enable X11 forwarding++ is checked/filled.  Then enter the details to connect to the cluster in
 the main window and that's all! If you are loading a previous saved session, then load the session first and then enable the 
 X-Forwarding. 
 
-
 After you have allowed X-Forwarding, you are ready to configure **Rclone**. 
 
 ## Rclone and OneDrive
@@ -74,14 +73,14 @@ s) Set configuration password
 q) Quit config
 n/s/q>
 ```
-Select **n** and press **Enter** Key
+Select `n` and press the ++Enter++ key.
 
 2.
 ```
 Enter name for new remote.
 name>
 ```
-Enter the **name of your own choose for your remote** connection and press **Enter** key.
+Enter a simple text label for your remote connection and press the ++Enter++ key. We've used `UCLDrive` here, and it is easier to correctly use on the command-line if it does not contain spaces.
 
 3. Something similar to this will be displayed. Please check what number corresponds to **Microsoft OneDrive**
    option and enter that one. 
@@ -153,7 +152,7 @@ Choose a number from below, or type in your own value.
 61 / seafile   \ (seafile)
 Storage> 
 ```
-In this case,**Microsoft OneDrive** corresponds to the option **36**, so enter **36** and press **Enter** key.
+In this case,**Microsoft OneDrive** corresponds to option 36, so enter `36` and press the ++Enter++ key.
 
 4.
 ```
@@ -162,7 +161,7 @@ Leave blank normally.
 Enter a value. Press Enter to leave empty.
 client_id> 
 ```
-Press **Enter** key to leave empty.
+Press ++Enter++ to leave empty.
 
 5.
 ```
@@ -171,7 +170,7 @@ Leave blank normally.
 Enter a value. Press Enter to leave empty.
 client_secret> 
 ```
-Press **Enter** key to leave empty.
+Press ++Enter++ to leave empty.
 
 6.
 ```
@@ -185,15 +184,15 @@ Press Enter for the default (global).
 4 / Azure and Office 365 operated by Vnet Group in China   \ (cn)
 region>
 ```
-Select **1** and press **Enter** Key
+Select `1` and press the ++Enter++ Key.
 
 ```
 Option tenant.ID of the service principal's tenant. Also called its directory ID.
 Set this if using- Client Credential flowEnter a value.
 Press Enter to leave empty.
 tenant> 
 ```
-Press **Enter** to leave empty
+Press ++Enter++ to leave empty.
 
 8.
 ```
@@ -202,7 +201,7 @@ y) Yes
 n) No (default)
 y/n>
 ```
-Select **n** and press **Enter** key.
+Select `n` and press the ++Enter++ key.
 
 9.
 ```
@@ -214,10 +213,10 @@ y) Yes (default)
 n) No
 y/n>
 ```
-Select **y** and press **Enter** key.
+Select `y` and press the ++Enter+ key.
 
 **If you have installed Xming and habilitated correctly X-Forwarding in Putty or your preferred method, 
-then a window will open in your perosnal machine. There, you must log in, in this case into Microsoft using 
+then a browser window will open on your personal machine. There, you must log in, in this case into Microsoft 365 using 
 your UCL account (internal).**
 
 10.
@@ -234,18 +233,18 @@ Press Enter for the default (onedrive).
 7 | E.g. /teams/hr   \ (path
 config_type> 
 ```
-Select **1** and press **Enter** key.
+Select `1` and press the ++Enter++ key.
 
 11.
 ```
 Option config_driveid. Select drive you want to use
 Choose a number from below, or type in your own string value.
-Press Enter for the default (b!ra4Fi4CqS0GYT_qied1OV9A2pTgX9JxHhfZTS2MwNK-0r_cRHFddS7D8Yt0CozO-).
-1 / OneDrive (business)   \ (b!ra4Fi4CqS0GYT_qied1OV9A2pTgX9JxHhfZTS2MwNK-0r_cRHFddS7D8Yt0CozO-)
-2 / PersonalCacheLibrary (business)   \ (b!ra4Fi4CqS0GYT_qied1OV9A2pTgX9JxHhfZTS2MwNK9-7X_uAf71Qavjc1vd7Xis)
+Press Enter for the default (b!ra4Fi4CqS0GYT_qied18V9A2pTgX9JxHhfZTS2MwNK-0r_cRHFddS7D8Yt0CozO-).
+1 / OneDrive (business)   \ (b!ra4Fi4CqS0GYT_qied18V9A2pTgX9JxHhfZTS2MwNK-0r_cRHFddS7D8Yt0CozO-)
+2 / PersonalCacheLibrary (business)   \ (b!ra4Fi4CqS0GYT_qied1OP9A2pTgX9JxHhfZTS2MwNK9-7X_uAf71Qavjc1vd7Xis)
 config_driveid> 
 ```
-Select **1** and press **Enter** key.
+Select `1` and press the ++Enter++ key.
 
 12.
 ```
@@ -255,7 +254,7 @@ y) Yes (default)
 n) No
 y/n>
 ```
-If the ULR is ok, then select **y** and press **Enter** key.
+If the URL is ok, then select `y` and press the ++Enter++ key.
 
 13.
 ```
@@ -271,7 +270,13 @@ Options:
 - region: global
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 - drive_id: b!ra4Fi4CqS0GYT_qied1OV9A2pTgX9JxHhfZTS2MwNK-0r_cRHFddS7D8Yt0CozO-
 - drive_type: business
 Keep this "UCLDrive" remote?
@@ -280,8 +285,8 @@ e) Edit this remote
 d) Delete this remote
 y/e/d> 
 ```
-If everything is ok., then select **y** and press **Enter** key.
+If everything is ok., then select `y` and press the ++Enter++ key.
 
 Now you are ready to use **Rclone**!
 
-If you are new using Rclone, please look [here](https://rclone.org/docs/#basic-syntax) the basic syntax. 
+If you are new using **Rclone**, please consult the [official basic syntax documentation](https://rclone.org/docs/#basic-syntax).