content: update llm post

Author: glenngillen

src/content/blog/secure-llm-connections.mdx

@@ -381,14 +381,20 @@ that we can use to securely access the OpenAI service over Azure Private Link.
 
 ![Azure private endpoint](/blog/secure-llm-connections/azure-ai-private-endpoint.png)
 
+The reason we're using the Azure OpenAI service here is [because of the level
+of isolation and privacy Azure OpenAI is able to offer](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/legal/cognitive-services/openai/data-privacy?tabs=azure-portal).
+Our data isn't available to other customers, isn't shared with OpenAI, and isn't 
+used to improve models. 
+
 ## Setup Ockam
 
 <CodeTour>
 
 ### !!steps 
 
-The first step to using Ockam is installing it on your local workstation and 
-enrolling yourself and that workstation as an administrator of your project. 
+The first step to using Ockam is [signing up and creating a new account](https://www.ockam.io/signup
+). Once you're signed up, you can install Ockam Command on your local workstation and 
+enroll that workstation as an administrator of your project. 
 
 ```bash ! tour
 curl --proto '=https' --tlsv1.2 -sSfL \