From a38cf147f534e5261269dabefd827ed9dc479be9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matt Pritchard <matt.pritchard@stfc.ac.uk>
Date: Mon, 10 Feb 2025 09:55:40 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] tweaks to submission examples

---
 .../rocky9-migration-2024.md                  | 31 ++++++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/docs/software-on-jasmin/rocky9-migration-2024.md b/content/docs/software-on-jasmin/rocky9-migration-2024.md
index 52df816a7..64f2f8389 100644
--- a/content/docs/software-on-jasmin/rocky9-migration-2024.md
+++ b/content/docs/software-on-jasmin/rocky9-migration-2024.md
@@ -329,29 +329,38 @@ There are 3 partitions currently available on LOTUS2, with associated allowed qu
 
 #### Job submission
 
-In order to successfully submit a job to LOTUS2, 3 mandatory fields must be specified. These are a partition, an account, and a QoS. The LOTUS2 configuration has been set to use the `standard` partition as the default if none is specified. However, users are discouraged from relying on this.
+In order to successfully submit a job to LOTUS2, 3 mandatory fields must be specified. These are a partition, an account, and a QoS. The LOTUS2 configuration has been set to use the `standard` partition as the default if none is specified. However, users are discouraged from relying on the default.
 
-Example of a batch Script:
+Example of a batch Script: **NB: remove any trailing whitespace**
 
-**NB: remove any trailing whitespace**
+Replace `mygws` with the name of an account that you belong to (check with the `useraccounts` command, as shown above), and other values appropriate to your job.
 
 ```bash
 #!/bin/bash
-#SBATCH --job-name="Job Name"
-#SBATCH --time=<wall time required>
-#SBATCH --mem=<memory required>
-#SBATCH --cpus=<cpus required for multicore jobs e.g. MPI>
-#SBATCH --account=<account_name>
-#SBATCH --partition=<partition_name>
-#SBATCH --qos=<qos_name>
+#SBATCH --job-name="My test job"
+#SBATCH --time=01:00
+#SBATCH --mem=1G
+#SBATCH --account=mygws
+#SBATCH --partition=debug
+#SBATCH --qos=debug
 
 # rest of script here
 ```
 
+
+Save this script file as e.g.`test_submit.sh`
+Then submit this with:
+
+{{<command user="user" host="host1000">}}
+sbatch test_submit.sh
+{{</command>}}
+
 For a pseudo-interactive session on a LOTUS2 compute node:
 
+(again, replace `mygws` with an account that you belong to, from the `useraccounts` command)
+
 {{<command user="user" host="host1000">}}
-srun --account=cedaproc --qos=standard --pty /bin/bash
+srun --account=mygws --partition=debug --qos=debug --pty /bin/bash
 (out)srun: job 586 queued and waiting for resources
 (out)srun: job 586 has been allocated resources
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