Fix section "Redis backup" in 12.4.md

Author: DeepAnchor

en/12.4.md

@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ As you can see, importing and exporting database is a fairly simple matter. If y
 
 ## Redis backup
 
-Redis is our most used NoSQL, its backup is also divided into two kinds: hot backup and cold backup, Redis also supports master/slave mode, so our hot backup can be achieved in this way, we can refer to the corresponding configuration the official document profiles, quite simple. Here we introduce cold backup mode: Redis will actually timed inside the memory cache data saved to the database file inside, we just backed up the corresponding file can be, is to use rsync backup to a previously described non-local machine room can be achieved.
+Redis is one of the most popular NoSQL databases, and both hot and cold backup techniques can also be used in systems which use it. Like MySQL, Redis also supports master/slave mode, which is ideal for implementing hot backups (refer to Redis' official documentation to learn learn how to configure this; the process is very straightforward). As for cold backups, Redis routinely saves cached data in memory to the database file on-disk. We can simply use the rsync backup method described above to synchronize it with a non-local machine. 
 
 ## Redis recovery