grammar in the first sentence was wonky

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Author: marulango

index.html

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
         <div class="columns">
           <div class="column is-half">
             <p class="greeting animate__animated animate__fadeInDown">Hello there!</p>
-            <p class="animate__animated animate__fadeIn animate__delay-1s">I’m Maru - a designer who loves to create experiences that empower humans through product strategy, interaction and visual design.</p>
+            <p class="animate__animated animate__fadeIn animate__delay-1s">I’m Maru - a designer passionate about creating experiences that empower people by leveraging product strategy, interaction, and visual design.</p>
           </div>
         </div>
       </div>