Merge pull request #1630 from davidmaxwaterman/patch-2

koddsson · web-flow · commit 4b582201ddf6 · 2023-04-28T18:51:16.000+02:00
grammar tweaks
diff --git a/docs/index.md b/docs/index.md
@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@ reasons:
   [
     {
       header: Built on web standards,
-      text: "Work with and extend what's available in modern browsers, learning skills, and writing code that stays relevant.",
+      text: "Work with and extend what's available in modern browsers, while learning skills and writing code with the longevity of the standards themselves.",
     },
     {
       header: Lightweight,
-      text: 'Simple solutions that are lightweight and have a low barrier to entry. With extension points for power users.',
+      text: 'Simple solutions that are lightweight and have a low barrier to entry, with extension points for power users.',
     },
     {
       header: Low complexity,

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`9`	`9`	`[`
`10`	`10`	`{`
`11`	`11`	`header: Built on web standards,`
`12`		`- text: "Work with and extend what's available in modern browsers, learning skills, and writing code that stays relevant.",`
	`12`	`+ text: "Work with and extend what's available in modern browsers, while learning skills and writing code with the longevity of the standards themselves.",`
`13`	`13`	`},`
`14`	`14`	`{`
`15`	`15`	`header: Lightweight,`
`16`		`- text: 'Simple solutions that are lightweight and have a low barrier to entry. With extension points for power users.',`
	`16`	`+ text: 'Simple solutions that are lightweight and have a low barrier to entry, with extension points for power users.',`
`17`	`17`	`},`
`18`	`18`	`{`
`19`	`19`	`header: Low complexity,`