Small edits & verbal feedback from jonnew

Author: cjsha

articles/hardware/rhs2116/rhs2116-trigger-data.md

@@ -11,22 +11,21 @@ save data about the Rhs2116 stimulus.
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 The <xref: OpenEphys.Onix1.Rhs2116TriggerData> operator generates a sequence of 
-<xref: OpenEphys.Onix1.Rhs2116TriggerDataFrame>. Its DeviceName property is set to
+[Rhs2116TriggerDataFrames](xref:OpenEphys.Onix1.Rhs2116TriggerDataFrame). Its DeviceName property is set to
 "HeadstageRhs2116/StimulusTrigger" which links `Rhs2116TriggerData` to the stimulus devices on the
 RHS2116 Headstage.
 
 The <xref: Bonsai.IO.CsvWriter> operator selects Clock, Delay, Status, and Origin members from the
 `Rhs2116TriggerDataFrame` to write to a file with a name of the following format:
-`rhs2116trigger_<filecount>.csv`. The Clock, Delay, Status, and Origin members are selected using
-the `CsvWriter`'s `Selector` property. The information contained in these members are as follows:
+`rhs2116trigger_<filecount>.csv`. These members are selected using the `CsvWriter`'s `Selector`
+property. They contain the following information:
 - **Clock**: the <xref:OpenEphys.Onix1.ContextTask.AcquisitionClockHz>-based sample times that a
   stimulus trigger is received
 - **Delay**: the delay between receiving the trigger to the physical application of the stimulus, in
-  microseconds
+  microseconds, as defined by the input to <xref: OpenEphys.Onix1.Rhs2116StimulusTrigger>
 - **Status**: the delivery status of the stimulus. This includes whether the stimulus was delivered
-  or why it might not have been delivered. Cases that might prevent the delivery of a stimulus
-  include if stimulator is disarmed or the stimulus sequencer is already in the midst of delivering
-  a stimulus.
-- **Origin**: specifies whether the stimulus was triggered by writing to a register, a local GPIO
-  pin, or an external synchronization source
+  or why it might not have been delivered (i.e. if stimulator is disarmed or the stimulus sequencer
+  is already in the midst of delivering a stimulus).
+- **Origin**: specifies whether the stimulus was triggered by writing to a register, setting a local
+  GPIO pin, or via an external synchronization source