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 === Git in IntelliJ / PyCharm / WebStorm / PhpStorm / RubyMine
 
-JetBrains IDEs - IntelliJ IDEA / PyCharm / WebStorm / PhpStorm / RubyMine / etc - ship with the Git Integration plugin.
-It provides the dedicated view in the IDE to work with Git and GitHub Pull Requests.
+JetBrains IDEs (such as IntelliJ IDEA, PyCharm, WebStorm, PhpStorm, RubyMine, and others) ship with a Git Integration plugin.
+It provides a dedicated view in the IDE to work with Git and GitHub Pull Requests.
 
 .Version Control ToolWindow in JetBrains IDEs.
 image::images/jb.png[Version Control ToolWindow in JetBrains IDEs.]
 
-The integration relies on the command-line git client and requires one to be installed.
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+The integration relies on the command-line git client, and requires one to be installed.
 The official documentation is available at https://www.jetbrains.com/help/idea/using-git-integration.html