Merge pull request #2210 from segmentio/DOC_383_Journeys_updates

Build a Journey edits [DOC-383]

Author: pwseg

src/personas/journeys/build-journey.md

@@ -3,8 +3,6 @@ title: Build a Journey
 ---
 {% include content/plan-grid.md name="journeys" %}
 
-Use this guide to create a new Journey.
-
 ## Before you begin
 
 Verify that you've connected at least one source to your Personas space, with events streaming in.
@@ -19,9 +17,9 @@ For more information, see [Setting up your Sources](/docs/personas/quickstart/#s
    1. Add a name to describe the step, for example `New users`.
    2. Add inclusion conditions, or import conditions from an existing audience to define users who will enter the Journey.
    3. Check **Use historical data** to allow users who have already matched the entry criteria to enter the Journey. Otherwise, only users who meet the entry conditions after publication will enter the Journey.
-   4. Click **Preview** to see the list of user who meet your criteria. Verify that you've defined the right conditions.
+   4. Click **Preview** to see the list of users who meet your criteria. Verify that you've defined the right conditions.
    5. Click **Save**.
-4. Segment displays the entry condition on the Journey Builder canvas. It may take up to 2 minutes for Segment to estimate the number of users in the journey.
+4. Segment displays the entry condition on the Journey Builder canvas. It may take up to two minutes for Segment to estimate the number of users in the journey.
 5. Click **+** to add the next step and view available step types.
 
 > info ""
@@ -36,7 +34,7 @@ If you select the **Use historical data** option, Segment queries all historical
 
 ## Available step types
 
-Journeys provides 5 step types, which you can add after the entry condition.
+Journeys provides five step types, which you can add after the entry condition.
 
 ![Step types](images/journey_step-types.png)
 
@@ -46,20 +44,20 @@ Journeys provides 5 step types, which you can add after the entry condition.
 
 **Wait for duration** defines the length of time in minutes, hours, days, or weeks that a user must wait before moving to the next step.
 
-**True/false split** divides the previous step's user group into 2 branches, based on Boolean logic against a defined condition. Users who satisfy the condition(s) move to the **True** branch. Otherwise, they move to the **False** branch. To enforce mutual exclusivity, Journeys evaluates true/false conditions when a user reaches the relevant step.  
+**True/false split** divides the previous step's user group into two branches, based on Boolean logic against a defined condition. Users who satisfy the condition(s) move to the **True** branch. Otherwise, they move to the **False** branch. To enforce mutual exclusivity, Journeys evaluates true/false conditions when a user reaches the relevant step.  
 
 You can add Step Names to describe the users in the True and False branch.
 
 ![true/false split](images/journey_t-f-split.png)
 
-**Multi-branch split** divides the group of users from the previous step into 2 or more branches based on conditions you define for each branch. 
+**Multi-branch split** divides the group of users from the previous step into two or more branches based on each branch's defined conditions. 
 
-Define the number of branches you want to create. Then, add a **Wait for condition** step to define each branch's condition.
+Define the number of branches you want to create, then add a **Wait for condition** step to define each branch's condition.
 
 > info ""
 > Journeys doesn't enforce mutual exclusivity in branch conditions. For more information about ensuring branch exclusivity, see [Best Practices](#).
 
-**Send to Destinations** delivers information about the journey to the selected Destination. For more information, see [Send data to Destinations](/docs/personas/journeys/send-data)
+**Send to Destinations** delivers information about the Journey to the selected Destination. For more information, see [Send data to Destinations](/docs/personas/journeys/send-data)
 
 ## Cloning a Journey
 
@@ -90,19 +88,9 @@ When you’ve finished creating your Journey, click **Save as Draft** in the bot
 
 Keep the following considerations in mind when working with a published Journey:
 
-- It may take up to 3 hours for Journeys to compute user counts after publication.
+- It may take up to three hours for Journeys to compute user counts after publication.
 - You can edit a Journey's name, description, and Destination steps.
 - You can't add, edit, or delete other steps in the Journey.
 - Once Journeys computes and displays user counts, you’ll see the list of users at each step of the Journey.
 - Click a user profile to see the Journey list to which they belong.
 - Journeys sends and updates data to Destinations in real-time.
-
-## Edit name, description, and Destinations
-
-### Edit name and description
-To edit your Journey name and description, navigate to the **Settings** tab of the Journey Overview.
-
-### Edit destinations
-To edit Destinations, click **Edit Destinations** from the Journey Overview. You can add, edit, or delete connected Destinations within existing Send to Destinations steps.
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