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From: Adriaan <1079135+adriaandotcom@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 5 Nov 2024 16:21:22 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] Improve intro

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-Concerned about your website visitors’ privacy when using Simple Analytics? We understand. Let’s be clear: we never collect your visitors’ IP addresses. And with our proxy setup option using Caddy, NGINX, Netlify, or Vercel, you have the power to ensure those IP addresses never reach us. This setup acts as a privacy shield, offering you and your visitors added peace of mind.
+Concerned about your website visitors’ privacy when using Simple Analytics? We understand. Let’s be clear: we never collect your visitors’ IP addresses. And with our proxy setup option using Caddy, NGINX, Netlify, or Vercel, you have the power to ensure those IP addresses never reach us. This setup acts as a privacy shield, keeping your visitors' IP addresses from reaching external services.
 
 If Caddy is your tool of choice, you can quickly set it up as a proxy with just a few lines in your Caddyfile. If you’re using NGINX, you can do something similar by adding some configuration to your server directive. And if you’re on Netlify or Vercel, you can set up a proxy by adding redirect rules to your site’s configuration. This lets analytics traffic go through your site before reaching us.