Merge pull request #543 from w3c/changes-with-g-c

Changes made that Gregorio, Charles, and George agreed on

Author: GeorgeKerscher

a11y-meta-display-guide/2.0/draft/guidelines/index.html

@@ -551,8 +551,7 @@ <h3>Introduction to key accessibility information</h3>
 			<div class="note">
 				<p>This document does not define the order in which to
 					show the key accessibility information; each
-					implementer can decide the preferred order for
-					showing the accessibility information that
+					implementer can decide the preferred order and appropriate headings to use to show the accessibility information that
 					follows.</p>
 				<p>In this document are examples of important metadata
 					that is expected to be in a wide range of
@@ -1235,21 +1234,19 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 
 					<ul>
 						<li><span data-localization-id="navigation-toc"
-								data-localization-mode="compact">table
-								of
-								contents</span></li>
+								data-localization-mode="compact">Table
+								of contents</span></li>
 						<li><span
 								data-localization-id="navigation-index"
-								data-localization-mode="compact">index</span>
+								data-localization-mode="compact">Index</span>
 						</li>
 						<li><span
 								data-localization-id="navigation-structural"
-								data-localization-mode="compact">headings</span>
+								data-localization-mode="compact">Headings</span>
 						</li>
 						<li><span
 								data-localization-id="navigation-page-navigation"
-								data-localization-mode="compact">go to
-								page </span></li>
+								data-localization-mode="compact">Go to page </span></li>
 <li>No information is available</li>
 					</ul>
 				</aside>
@@ -1284,10 +1281,10 @@ <h3 data-localization-id="charts-diagrams-formulas-title">Rich content</h3>
 				</p>
 			</div>
 
-			<p>Indicates the presence of math, chemical formulas, charts, diagrams, figures or graphs within the title and whether these are in an accessible format or available in an alternative form, e.g., whether math and chemical formulas are navigable with assistive technologies, or whether extended descriptions are available for complex images. In addition, it indicates the presence of videos and prerecorded audio, and if closed captions, open captions, or transcripts are available.</p>
+			<p>Indicates the presence of math, chemical formulas, charts, diagrams, figures or graphs within the title and whether these are in an accessible format or available in an alternative form, e.g., whether math and chemical formulas are navigable with assistive technologies, or whether extended descriptions are available for information-rich images. In addition, it indicates the presence of videos and if closed captions, open captions, or transcripts for prerecorded audio are available.</p>
 
 			<p>This group should be displayed only if the metadata
-				indicates the presence of math, chemical formulas, charts, diagrams, figures, graphs, videos, or audio within the title, otherwise it can be hidden.</p>
+				indicates the presence of math, chemical formulas, charts, diagrams, figures, graphs, videos, or transcripts of audio within the title, otherwise it can be hidden.</p>
 
 			<section id="cdf-examples">
 				<h4>Examples</h4>
@@ -1318,23 +1315,16 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 						<li>
 							<span
 								data-localization-id="charts-diagrams-formulas-extended"
-								data-localization-mode="descriptive">Charts, diagrams, figures, and graphs have extended descriptions</span>
+								data-localization-mode="descriptive">Information-rich images are described by extended descriptions</span>
 						</li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="additional-accessibility-information-adaptation-closed-captions" data-localization-mode="descriptive">
 Videos included in publications have closed
 							captions </span></li>
 
 <li><span data-localization-id="additional-accessibility-information-adaptation-open-captions" data-localization-mode="descriptive">
 Videos included in publications have open captions </span></li>
-<li><span data-localization-id="pre-recorded-audio-complementary" data-localization-mode="descriptive">
-Prerecorded audio is present in the publication</span></li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="additional-accessibility-information-adaptation-full-transcript" data-localization-mode="descriptive">
 Prerecorded audio has a full transcript</span></li>
-<li>
-							<span data-localization-id="charts-diagrams-formulas-unknown"
-								data-localization-mode="descriptive">
-								Math, chemical formulas, charts, diagrams, figures, graphs, videos, or audio content  not identified as being accessible</span>
-						</li>
 <li>No information is available</li>
 					</ul>
 				</aside>
@@ -1361,23 +1351,16 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 <li>
 							<span
 								data-localization-id="charts-diagrams-formulas-extended"
-								data-localization-mode="compact">Complex images are described by extended descriptions</span>
+								data-localization-mode="compact">Information-rich images are described by extended descriptions</span>
 </li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="additional-accessibility-information-adaptation-closed-captions" data-localization-mode="compact">
 Videos have closed
 							captions </span></li>
 						<li>
 <span data-localization-id="additional-accessibility-information-adaptation-open-captions" data-localization-mode="compact">
 Videos have open captions </span></li>
-<li><span data-localization-id="pre-recorded-audio-complementary" data-localization-mode="compact">
-Prerecorded audio is present</span></li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="additional-accessibility-information-adaptation-full-transcript" data-localization-mode="compact">
 Prerecorded audio has transcript</span></li>
-
-						<li> <span
-								data-localization-id="charts-diagrams-formulas-unknown"
-								data-localization-mode="compact">Rich content not identified as being accessible</span>
-						</li>
 <li>No information is available</li>
 					</ul>
 				</aside>