Merge pull request #2633 from TEIC/trishaoconnor_2367

Updated specs for `<line>` and `<lb>`

P5/Source/Specs/lb.xml

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
   <gloss versionDate="2022-05-12" xml:lang="es">inicio de línea</gloss>
   <gloss versionDate="2022-08-17" xml:lang="it">inizio di riga</gloss>
   <gloss versionDate="2017-06-25" xml:lang="de">Zeilenanfang</gloss>
-  <desc versionDate="2005-01-14" xml:lang="en">marks the beginning of a new (typographic) line in some edition or version of a text.</desc>
+  <desc versionDate="2005-01-14" xml:lang="en">marks the beginning of a topographic line in some edition or version of a text.</desc>
   <desc versionDate="2007-12-20" xml:lang="ko">텍스트의 편집 또는 버전에서 새로운 (인쇄상의) 행 시작을 표지한다.</desc>
   <desc versionDate="2007-05-02" xml:lang="zh-TW">標記某版本文本裡 (在印刷上) 的新起行。</desc>
   <desc versionDate="2008-04-05" xml:lang="ja">ある版における新しい(印刷上の)行の始まりを示す。</desc>
@@ -32,8 +32,7 @@
   </classes>
   <content><empty/></content>
   <exemplum xml:lang="en">
-    <p>This example shows typographical line breaks within metrical lines, where they occur at different
-      places in different editions:</p>
+    <p>This example shows the encoding of the beginning of each new topographic line within a metrical line, indicating where it occurs in both the 1667 and 1674 editions:</p>
     <egXML xmlns="http://www.tei-c.org/ns/Examples" xml:id="gi-lb-egXML-vk">
       <l>Of Mans First Disobedience,<lb ed="1674"/> and<lb ed="1667"/> the Fruit</l>
       <l>Of that Forbidden Tree, whose<lb ed="1667 1674"/> mortal tast</l>
@@ -58,9 +57,9 @@
     </egXML>
   </exemplum>
   <exemplum xml:lang="en">
-    <p>This example encodes typographical line breaks as a means of
+    <p>This example shows the encoding of the beginning of a new topographical line as a means of
 preserving the visual appearance of a title page. The <att>break</att>
-attribute is used to show that the line break does not (as elsewhere)
+      attribute is used to show that the beginning of the new line does not (as elsewhere)
 mark the start of a new word.  </p>
     <egXML xmlns="http://www.tei-c.org/ns/Examples" xml:id="gi-lb-egXML-cz">
       <titlePart><lb/>With Additions, ne-<lb break="no"/>ver before Printed.</titlePart>
@@ -89,15 +88,15 @@ soi-<lb break="no"/>xante &amp; dixhuytiesme livre.
       starts. The <att>n</att> attribute, if used, indicates the number or other value associated
       with the text between this point and the next <gi>lb</gi> element, typically the sequence
       number of the line within the page, or other appropriate unit. This element is intended to be
-      used for marking actual line breaks on a manuscript or printed page, at the point where they
-      occur; it should not be used to tag structural units such as lines of verse (for which the
+      used for marking the beginning of each new topographic line on a manuscript or printed page, at the point where it
+      occurs; it should not be used to tag structural units such as lines of verse (for which the
         <gi>l</gi> element is available) except in circumstances where structural units cannot
       otherwise be marked. </p>
     <p>The <att>type</att> attribute may be used to characterize the
-    line break in any respect. The more specialized attributes
+    line beginning in any respect. The more specialized attributes
     <att>break</att>, <att>ed</att>, or <att>edRef</att> should be preferred when the
-    intent is to indicate whether or not the line
-    break is word-breaking, or to note the source from which it
+      intent is to indicate whether or not the beginning of the new topographic line
+     is word-breaking, or to note the source from which it
     derives.  </p>
   </remarks>
   <remarks versionDate="2007-06-12" xml:lang="fr">

P5/Source/Specs/line.xml

@@ -21,6 +21,7 @@
 
   </content>
   <exemplum xml:lang="en">
+    <p>This example shows topographical lines as a means of preserving the visual appearance of a poem:</p>
     <egXML xmlns="http://www.tei-c.org/ns/Examples" xml:id="gi-line-egXML-ij">
       <surface>
         <zone>
@@ -53,7 +54,7 @@ said</line>
     <p>This element should be used only to mark up writing which
 is topographically organized as a series of lines, horizontal or
 vertical. It should not be used to mark lines of verse (for which use
-<gi>l</gi>) nor to mark linebreaks within text which has been encoded
+<gi>l</gi>) nor to mark line beginnings within text which has been encoded
 using structural elements such as <gi>p</gi> (for which use
 <gi>lb</gi>).</p>
   </remarks>