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Reviewer's guide (collapsed on small PRs)Reviewer's GuideRefines the introduction documentation for PSLab by improving grammar, clarity, and formatting while preserving the original technical meaning and content. File-Level Changes
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Hey - I've found 1 issue, and left some high level feedback:
- In the updated bullet for the power supply, consider using a consistent dash style for voltage ranges (either hyphen or en dash) to match the rest of the document’s conventions.
- You switched from numeric to word form for the number of programmable voltage sources (“3” to “three”); it may be worth aligning this with the project’s general style for numeric values in technical lists.
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Please address the comments from this code review:
## Overall Comments
- In the updated bullet for the power supply, consider using a consistent dash style for voltage ranges (either hyphen or en dash) to match the rest of the document’s conventions.
- You switched from numeric to word form for the number of programmable voltage sources (“3” to “three”); it may be worth aligning this with the project’s general style for numeric values in technical lists.
## Individual Comments
### Comment 1
<location> `introduction.md:33` </location>
<code_context>
-- Desktop low voltage power supply with 3 programmable voltage sources (+/-3.3 V,+/-5V,0-3 V)
+- Desktop low-voltage power supply with three programmable voltage sources (+/-3.3 V, +/-5 V, 0–3 V)
- 3 channel[^1] oscilloscope with software selectable amplification stages
- Multimeter functions including voltmeter and capacitance measurement
- Digital and analog function generators
</code_context>
<issue_to_address>
**nitpick (typo):** Consider hyphenating "3 channel" as a compound adjective.
This matches standard compound-adjective usage before a noun.
```suggestion
- 3-channel[^1] oscilloscope with software selectable amplification stages
```
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This PR improves grammar, clarity, and formatting in the introduction
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introduction.mdfile.Summary by Sourcery
Improve wording and formatting in the PSLab introduction documentation to enhance readability without changing technical meaning.
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