Merge pull request #24 from ietf-rats-wg/sec-cons-rephrase

Slightly rephrase the security considerations
ietf-rats-wg · Feb 16, 2025 · b6e1d66 · b6e1d66
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 # Security and Privacy Considerations {#seccons}
 
-The Name and Version of a component could provide an attacker with detailed information about the running software and configuration settings of the device.
-This information could also expose private details regarding the device.
-The stability requirement for the component's Name could potentially enable tracking.
+The Name and Version of a component can give an attacker detailed information about the software running on a device and its configuration settings.
+This information could offer an attacker valuable insights.
+Additionally, the stability requirement of the component's Name could potentially allow for tracking.
 
 # IANA Considerations