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4 changes: 2 additions & 2 deletions index.md
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layout: frontpage

# Header texts
headerTitle: "Object-Oriented Meets Functional"
headerSubtitle: "Have the best of both worlds. Construct elegant class hierarchies for maximum code reuse and extensibility, implement their behavior using higher-order functions. Or anything in-between."
headerTitle: "The Scala Programming Language"
headerSubtitle: "Scala is a concise high-level programming language. Scala's compiler helps you avoid bugs when writing complex applications, its fast runtime lets you build efficient, high-performance systems, with easy access to a huge ecosystem of libraries."

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I think you forgot an "and" before "its fast runtime".

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@gmethvin good catch, there is a missing and somewhere, but even with it added before its fast runtime sounds a bit odd. May be better to split it into two separate sentences

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nm I just added the and there and it seems to read fine

headerButtonTitle: "Learn More"
headerButtonUrl: "/what-is-scala/"

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