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 What do we do to protect your privacy and that of your visitors?
 
-1.  **We only collect what we need and nothing more.** This data probably won’t be of much interest to thieves.
+1.  **We do not collect personal data. Ever.** This data probably won’t be of much interest to thieves.
 2.  **You are in control of your data, and you can download or delete it at any time.** We don’t own any of it.
 3.  **The drives storing your data are fully encrypted.** If anybody did manage to steal them, they’d be useless.
 4.  **We will never sell your data.** Because, once again, it’s yours!
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 ## Compliance
 
-**Simple Analytics is 100% GDPR compliant with data protection law from installation**. Because it only processes anonymous data, it can satisfy the requirements of the strictest privacy regulation, including the GDPR, the ePrivacy Directive, the UK GDPR, and the PECT.
+**Simple Analytics is 100% GDPR compliant with data protection law from installation**. Because it only processes anonymous data, it can satisfy the requirements of the strictest privacy regulation, including the GDPR, the ePrivacy Directive, the UK GDPR, and the PECR.
 
 Simple Analytics **does not require pop-ups** such as consent banners or privacy notices, allowing for a seamless user experience on your website.
 
-Simple Analytics **does not need to transfer data** outside the EU to provide its service but can do so in order to provide non-EU customers with the data they need.
+Simple Analytics **does not need to transfer personal data** outside the EU to provide its service but can do so in order to provide non-EU customers with the data they need.
 
-Finally, **you do not need to sign a Data Processing Agreement** to use Simple Analytics! (Since we don't collect any personal data)
+Finally, **you do not need to sign a Data Processing Agreement** to use Simple Analytics since we don’t collect any personal data!
 
 You can find out more about our compliance [here](/compliance). 
 
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 ## Data Security & Ownership
 
-Your data are **fully encrypted** on our servers. We only rely on **European, GDPR-compliant providers** to ensure that your data are handled as safely as possible.
+Your data are **fully encrypted** on our dedicated servers. We only rely on **European, GDPR-compliant providers** to ensure that your data are handled as safely as possible.
 
 We retain your data as long as your Simple Analytics account is active (and in correspondance to your subscription plan) and never share the data with third parties. **You control your data** and can export it at any time.